Adinda Indah P [X-IS4]

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NEMO AND SHARK

In the ocean, there is a beautiful Nemo fish. She always cares for her sickly mother. She can not bear to see her sick mother constantly. She continues to seek special remedies for the mother.

One day while searching for medicine, she meets a creepy shark. Nemo directly hide in the seaweed. "Don't be afraid, I will not eat you, I hear your mother is seriously ill, I will help you find a drug." Shark is seduction to Nemo. Nemo approached the Shark slowly. "Is it true?" Nemo asked a little scared. And the Shark nodded.

And then, Nemo and Shark searched for medicine here and there. In the heart, the Shark says "Whoever wants to help her, I just want her mother to die as soon as possible." A few minute later, Sharks find a medicinal plant. Actually the plant is not a medicine, but poisor.

 "I found the medicine, Nemo!" Shouted the Shark. "Is it true?" Nemo asked with a smile. "Yes, come here!". Nemo approached her and was very grateful to the Shark. Nemo went straight home and made a concoction of the plant.

 "Mam... Drink this medicine to cure mother's pain." Command Nemo. Then her mother took the potion. And her mother went to bed. The next day, suddenly Nemo's mother died. Nemo very surprised. Her tears were instantly falling very swiftly.

 Nemo directly looking for Shark. In Nemo heart, said "I will repay your deeds to my mother, Shark. I will destroy you with my own hands!" The tears are still flowing. At that time, Nemo met his friend Shark. She asked, and his friend replied "Shark? Now he is gone again, he is been brought in by the fisherman this morning." His friend Sharks feel sad.

 "Oh oke... Thanks for the info." Said Nemo who just walked away. Tears can not stop. She is very sad her mother is gone. But she was very hapoy about he Shark's departure.

 "Why? Why should I accept his offer? Why is this all happening to me?" Nemo lamented that she went to her friend's house. Arriving at his friend's house, "Why Nemo? What happened to you?" Asked the Golden Fish, her best friend.

 Nemo tell what happened to her. Then her friend advised and entertained Nemo. Finally, Nemo can accept upon the departure of her mother. 



by Adinda I.P    :)

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  1. Writing Class Research17 April 2018 pukul 06.56

    1. Nemo directly hides -line 3
    2.some misspelling words ( poisor - poison) (can not - cannot) (hapoy- happy) ( nemo tell- nemo tells)
    3. Erase the word "upon" - last paragraph :)

    BalasHapus

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