Eka Septia P / X-IPS 4

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                          PINOCCHIO

         In the past, there was a puppeteer whose name is Geppetto. He eager to have a son very much but his wife passed away several years ago. One day, he got an idea to make a puppet in order to not be lonely again. He made puppet all day long. Finally, in the morning he had finished his work and he named the puppet Pinocchio. Soon, he felt lonely again since Pinochio couldn't walk or talk by itself. One night, Geppetto prayed to the God to become a real boy.
          In the next morning, he was surprised that Pinocchio was alive. He taught Pinocchio how to talk, read, speak, and to do other things as human. He then studied at an elemantary school. One day, Pinocchio felt bored and he come late. When Pinocchio came home, Geppetto asked him. He said that he was on school but he wasn't. Instantly, Pinocchio's nose grew longer, and it mean that he has lied.
          The next morning, Pinocchio was kidnaped by the owner of circus. Pinocchio soon became a slave for the circus. Ge was so famous because he was a puppet which can talk. Geppetto worried, because Pimoochio hadn't been going home for two days. He tried to find Pinocchio everywhere but he found nothing. When he searched him on the sea, big wave smashed him. He was in Whale's stomach when he awoke. He couldn't find the way to go out.
           In the order side, Pincchio finally could escape out from the circus. He came home, but nobody was there. Latter on, he searched Geppetto in the sea. He got same accident like Geppetto, and he met Geppetto in Whale's stomach. Both of them go out from it's stomach by making a fire. In the end of the story, they went home together and lived happily ever after

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  1. Writing Class Research17 April 2018 pukul 06.30

    1. Pimoochio or Pinocchio? -line 10
    2. he comes late -line 6
    3. it should be "elementary" - line 6

    BalasHapus
  2. Writing Class Research17 April 2018 pukul 07.35

    So far that's a good narrative text :) keep writing :)

    BalasHapus

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