Mia Vania / x-ips-4

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The Lonely Sharpo


One day, there was a porcupine named Sharpo. He was lonely. No one wanted to play with him.
“dear Sharpo, we don’t want to play with you because your spikes are too sharp. We don’t want you to hurt us,” said jumjum the rabbit.
“Jumjum is right, Sharpo, it is not because you’re bad or rude to us. It just because of your spikes. They will stab us if we are close to you.” Said katy the cat.
Sharpo felt lonely. Sharpo spent most of the time day dreaming at the river bank. “I would be happy if there were no spikes on my body.”
Suddenly, Lowi the turtle appeared from the river. He came to Sharpo and said, “what are you thinking of?”
“oh, nothing.” Sharpo replied.
“don’t lie to me, Sharpo! Who knows I can help you.” Said Lowi. Then he sat beside Sharpo. He wasn’t afraid of Sharpo’s spikes.
Shortly, Sharpo told his problem. Lowi nodded his head. He said. “poor you, but it isn’t your fault. I know your spikes are very usefull and helpful for you. They will realize it someday, trust me!”
Thanks, Lowi, you are my best friend.”
One day, Ligu the frog held his birthday party. He invited all his friends, including sharpo. But he decided not to come. He didn’t want to mess up the party.
“I’ll come with you Sharpo. I’ll tell everyone that you’re harmless.” Said Lowi, finally Sharpo attended the party. Everyone enjoyed it.
Suddenly Katy screamed, “help…help…! The evil wolf is coming. Save yourself!” then, everyone saved their lives, except Lowi and Sharpo. Lowi pulled his head and his leg into his shell. And Sharpo rolled his body into a ball.
Unintentionally, the evil wolf touched Sharpo. Of course, the spikes pricked him. He screamed. “ouch!” since his foot was bleeding, he didn’t chase Sharpo’s friend any longer. Then, he ran away.
“horray… horray…! Long live Sharpo! He saved our lives.” Said Jumjum and her friends. They thanked him from then on. Sharpo wasn’t lonely anymore.


Komentar

  1. Writing Class Research17 April 2018 pukul 08.44

    1. Misspelling words ( day dreaming- daydreaming ) (usefull - useful)
    2. Thanks for being the first students who posted the narrative text... :)

    So far that's a good narrative text :) keep writing :)

    BalasHapus

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