Rieke Novianti / X IS 4
The Forbidden Chamber
Once there was an evil wizard who dressed as a beggar. He went from house to house asking for alms and stealing the pretty girls. One day he knocked on the door of a house. There lived a man with three beautiful daughters. The eldest daughter opened the door and the wizard hypnotized her. He took her to his house in the midst of the woods. Everything was magnificent there. The daughter had all things she wished for.
One day, the wizard had to go on a journey. He left the keys of all rooms to the daughter. She could enter every room except one, otherwise she could die. He also gave an egg she needed to care.
After the wizard left the house, the daughter looked into every room and found beautiful things. Then she was curious to know about the forbidden room. She entered the room and found hundreds of kidnapped girls who had fallen asleep. The daughter frightened and ran out of the room. In a hurry, she dropped the egg and the egg turned red. The wizard came back and knew what had happened. Then, he dragged her into the forbidden chamber.
Next day, he went back to the same house and stole the second sister. But the same thing happened to her. He went back a third time and kidnapped the youngest sister, but this girl was very wise.
Before entering the forbidden chamber, she put the egg in the cupboard. Having known that there were many girls in the room including her sisters, she had an idea to release them. The wizard thought that the third daughter did what he said. He decided to marry her.
Before getting married, the daughter asked the wizard to send a full basket of gold to her parents. In the bottom of the basket, there were her sisters covered with gold. While the wizard left the house, the daughter let all girls free. She also asked the girls and their parents to come to the wizard’s house.
When the wizard came back, the girls and their parents dragged him into the forbidden chamber, locked the door and set fire to the house.

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BalasHapusSo far that's a good narrative text :) keep writing :)